Hi Gabby! I really like the topic you chose for your essay. I think it is very creative and colorful. I am not sure what glass object you used to create this "water waves" effect on the flowers (maybe a glass cup, a vase, or a glass window?), but I think it is a very good idea. It really gives this interesting and original touch to your photos. Then, I like the fact that you picked different kinds of flowers with different colors and also used different angles, because it shows us something new every time we view another one of your pictures and it keeps us interested. I can’t really tell what is the topic of your project but that could be "seeing the world/flowers from a different perspective". Looking at these photos makes me very relaxed and it is nice to look at them. However, I think you could try to take your pictures with a better light. Maybe try a different aperture? You could also make your images more sharp just like your last picture (the 13th). You can use a different shutter speed. Then, the images I would recommend you to keep for your final sequence would be your 5th, 7th, 10th, and 13th images, because they have nice bright colors, the flowers are different, and they are more sharp. Great job so far!
Hi Gabby!
ReplyDeleteI really like the topic you chose for your essay. I think it is very creative and colorful. I am not sure what glass object you used to create this "water waves" effect on the flowers (maybe a glass cup, a vase, or a glass window?), but I think it is a very good idea. It really gives this interesting and original touch to your photos. Then, I like the fact that you picked different kinds of flowers with different colors and also used different angles, because it shows us something new every time we view another one of your pictures and it keeps us interested. I can’t really tell what is the topic of your project but that could be "seeing the world/flowers from a different perspective". Looking at these photos makes me very relaxed and it is nice to look at them. However, I think you could try to take your pictures with a better light. Maybe try a different aperture? You could also make your images more sharp just like your last picture (the 13th). You can use a different shutter speed. Then, the images I would recommend you to keep for your final sequence would be your 5th, 7th, 10th, and 13th images, because they have nice bright colors, the flowers are different, and they are more sharp. Great job so far!